Monday 16 October 2017

WALT: Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.

Is National the best Party to vote for? Personally, I believe that Green’s is the best party to vote for.
The three policies that I like are, guarantee children the right to be educated at their local school, extend free doctor visits to people under the age of 18 furthermore increase health funding.
The first policy I will explain is Guarantee children the right to be educated at their local school.

My first policy that I like is, guarantee children the right to be educated at their local school.
The Green Party believes that every child has a right to be fully included and thrive in the education system. But the education act does not give all children the right to attend their local school.
I believe that students should be guaranteed to get an education close to home.
Children with friends that live close to their home leads to children having more friends so they get out more.
Children get exercise when/if they walk to school because it is close to their homes and removes children obesity. I’m concerned that New Zealand is one of many countries with a problem with children obesity.
Children should be able to have eduction close to their home and also be able to go to a doctor for free.

My second policy that I like is, extend free doctor visits to people under the age of 18
The Green Party believes that early intervention and preventative care are the most cost effective approaches to improving health. But the National Government has cut funding for these services.
I believe these free visits should be for everyone under the age of 18, this should improve health outcomes for young people.
Less children will be dying of disease because people with low income can take their children to the doctor without taking money for food away from their family.
Children from 0-18 shouldn't have to pay for doctor's appointments and to make that possible increase the amount of money they give to these facilities.

My last policy that I like is, increase health funding
The Green Party believes that healthcare should be delivered by a well-funded public health system. Funding needs to keep up with growing needs but the government has underfunded the health system. As a result, too many people are missing out on crucial health care and healthcare is becoming a luxury.
If they increase the funding amount more cures will be found and scientist will be able to keep people in this world for longer.
I believe that if there are more immigrants and people coming to New Zealand there needs to be a better health system.
I’m know going to talk about a poor policy from the Labour party.

Labour wants to Abolish National Standards. I believe that this policy is outrageous.
Students can check their national standards so they know what to work towards.
Teachers use it as a tool in the learning area.
The national standards are a great way to measure a school/students success. In contrast greens does not want to get rid of national standards as it is a great aspect in the learning area.
This is the one reason you shouldn't vote for the Labour party and that you should vote for the Green party.

So there, clearly I have explain why Green’s is the best party.
Green’s policies are the strongest in education.
As shown above the three points are, Guarantee children the right to be educated at their local school, extend free doctor visits to people under the age of 18 and increase health funding.
Should you really vote for someone/a party that doesn’t support your needs? Vote for Green’s.

My next steps are:
I need to have more motive language.

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